Revising an essay with comment
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I have an essay written and ready. My instructor asked me to revise this essay and I am going to post the instructor’s comments. I will also upload 2 articles that needed in writing this essay.
Comparative Rhetorical Analysis Essay (Fall 2019)CriteriaRatingsPts
Title & Introduction
20 pts
Full Marks
Title is appropriate and original Introduction includes a hook/attention-grabber. Context regarding the topic of graphic novels/comic books is provided. Both authors are introduced and sources are summarized. Thesis answers the Key Question and is highlighted yellow.
0 pts
No Marks
Comments
13 / 20 pts
Organization
30 pts
Full Marks
Body paragraphs have a clear topic. Body paragraphs discuss both authors. Body paragraphs progress in a logical order.
0 pts
No Marks
Comments
24 / 30 pts
Support & Integration of Sources
30 pts
Full Marks
Adequate evidence is used from both articles to support points. Paraphrase and quotation are used effectively.
0 pts
No Marks
Comments
20 / 30 pts
Rhetorical Analysis & Evaluation of Sources
60 pts
Full Marks
Comparison of rhetorical moves each author makes is effective. Analysis of rhetorical moves is clear and in-depth. Discussion of strengths and weaknesses of each text included. Evaluation of which article is more effective is clear. Personal opinions regarding topic are avoided.
0 pts
No Marks
Comments
40 / 60 pts
Conclusion
20 pts
Full Marks
Restates thesis and summarizes key points. Ends with a global statement about significance of analysis.
0 pts
No Marks
Comments
15 / 20 pts
Grammar, Highlighting, & MLA Format
40 pts
Full Marks
Grammar: There are few errors, and none that interfere with meaning. Highlighting: Thesis is highlighted yellow; topic sentences are highlighted green; body paragraph topics (one word or phrase) are in bold. [See student samples for more help with this annotation system.] MLA Formatting: Document is properly MLA formatted.
0 pts
No Marks
38 / 40 pts
Total Points: 150
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