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should only use standardized testing for admissions
According to BBC News,
it is the first time that Oxford University and some universities in U.K agree
to accept Chinese College Entrance Exam as a kind of standardized testing for
admissions. Standardized testing is a kind of test that can test different
students by the same questions at different place and time. Many universities
accept standardized testing for admission. Using standardized testing can help
universities to rate students’ academic levels for better admission, help
student to know how their academic levels and find their disadvantages, and
make admissions of universities more standard, although some people think
standardized testing may have negative effect on students, it can be solved.
standardized testing can help universities rate students’ academic levels for
better admission. There are many students apply for the same university, making
the admission work very busy. If a university can rate students according to
their academic levels. The university can give offers to excellent students
based on the rating, compared with unstandardized testing, standardized testing
make admission easier and clearer.
standardized testing can not only improve admission, but also help students to know
how their academic levels and find their disadvantages, for example, a student
can go to attend a standardized testing hosted by a university, then he will
also aware his disadvantages such as math or writing.
students know their academic levels and find their disadvantages, only using
standardized testing also help admissions of universities more standard. Compared
with other kind of testing can avoid subjective grading. Students will not have
low grades due to their bad handwriting or opinions that are not liked by the
teacher, because the standardized testing has a standard grading rule, and
students have chances to apply for regrading to make sure grading is fair.
Standardized testing makes classroom material consistent, and teachers have a
structure to know what should be taught, making students from different regions
have a fair education and testing environment.
Although only using standardized testing in
universities admissions has many advantages, some people think it will create major
stress on students, they will feel pressure when it comes to doing well in the
exam. The score of the tests will affect students, making them have negative
attitude on study. While it is true, but it is not important, it can be solved
by hiring a tutor. Parents can hire a tutor for their kid to help finding disadvantages
and manage the student’s study and provide a guide to overcome the problem.
should only use standardized testing for admissions, because it can improve
admissions of universities, help students know their position in the study and
find areas that they are not good at, and make the admissions of universities
more standard. Although standardized testing may have negative effect on
students, it can be avoided by hiring a tutor.